[5th Division] Roses Of Power

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[5th Division] Roses Of Power

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Post by Samuel_Carter_Awakening » Wed Apr 10, 2019 1:09 am

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Post by Samuel_Carter_Awakening » Wed Apr 10, 2019 1:49 am

Alas! The morning sun woke from its slumber, stretching it's rays far and wide. Across the inhabitants below its awesome place of superiority. It's scorching rays peered through the windows of several beings, making its debut unto their oculars by seeping through the lids meant to give out protection to the oculars. The one known as Amatoyoshi Hirāzakūra was no exception. The window to his left was left opened prior, laying on the wooden carved beauty with a bunch of mattress to further improve its beauty. Gently, the lids gave way for the emergence of blue oculars to grace the room with its presence. His physique obscured by white flowing apparel. Said apparel being pushed away gave way for onlookers to view the scars and bandages swirled round his being rapidly. With enough effort and support from both appendages, pushing himself upwards, he got to his feet, moving rather slowly with the help of a stick, a bandage also swirled around his head with a scar close to his left eye.

Each subtle step took him to a room where he freshened up, slowly, he unwrapped the bandage round his head, revealing a red hue on his fore head, this he cleaned with a clean soft towel and wrapped a new bandage there. Same procedure was set on his abdomen region and both fore arms, standing on his feet, stretching forth his right arm, wrapping his opened palm around the sheathe which housed Hikari. Taking it and setting it on his bed, from abaft the room. A humanoid silhouette arrayed in shihakusho would be seen by anyone who dared peeked into this room. Grabbing his sheathed blade and placing it by his left side, he adorned his neck with a long white scarf swirled around it, he proceeded to the training quarters by traversing on the earth. Each successive step he took shortened his journey and brought the quarters closer to him.

The quarters. An open ground. Beautified by several low level rocks, surrounded by trees with no sight of any training facility at hand. The moment he got there, he sat on the bare ground. luckily for him. numerous gaseous cluster filled the sky, fortified with enough thickness to hinder the rays of the retreating sun, these clusters taking a dark ash hue. The strong east crept upon this enclave, buoyed petals hitching a ride on it, forcing the loosened sleeves of the young man to scamper around, gaseous exchange between his lungs through his nostrils and the environment occurred heavily. three in number before retreating to his normal unheard method of breathing, a twirl in the sky formed, a testament to the glistening yellowish aura making its debut away from the sweat pores of the young man, to encapsulate himself and the material he wore, the clouds felt the intensity, the trees underwent negative phototropism and the ground beneath him broke into a little sized concavity with cracks in a 360° manner liken to a spider web. Index and middle finger of the right arm which he shot forward, came together, particles of reiatsu could be espied, taking form around his hand and behold, his lips parted for the first time to release a chant with a masculine tone liken to the roar of a lion, the wind serving as a messenger to take said sound waves into the ears of whosoever sought to hear them..

"Bakudo 9: Hōrin"..... "Disintegrate, black dog of Rondaniini, Look upon yourself and tear out your own throat!"

An orange hued tendril with spiraling yellow patterns erupted from his hand and attempts to trap a single tree amidst the bunch that sat around this quarter. The end of it remained in the hand of Amatoyoshi Hirazakūra allowing him to control the path of the tendril before and after capture. It was quite successful but lacked the ability to strength needed to ensnare persons of astronomical Strength or durability. With this, he sought for another one, this time, getting up on his feet. Forcefully projecting his right hand forward, the wind seemed to be in suspense, the environment looked on in awe to see what was to manifest from the outstretched right hand of this young prodigy. A quick clip displayed itself in his mind scape with eyes closed, a clip displaying himself yelling in pain the moment his blade made contact with the skin of killy lohr, the electric current that surged through his blade and unto his body, the sparks that brightened the environ, the pain exerted on his being, the continual fueling of the current into his being. This crazed scenario brought forth tears which slithered down his cheeks and with a vengeful spirit and a roaring voice, he shouted once more.

"Bakudo 9: Hōrin"...... "Disintegrate, black dog of Rondaniini, Look upon yourself and tear out your own throat"

An orange hued tendril with spiraling yellow patterns erupted from his hand and attempts to trap another single tree amidst the bunch that sat around this quarter. Luckily for him, this was successful, he could feel the effectiveness and the strength it took alongside to further restrain the tree. His lids shut slowly, his mass retreating to the ground and landing with a great thud. A unique state of rest sipped in. Laying flat with face upwards towards the sky, he rested underneath the beauty of the morning, the dark clusters of gaseous properties gave way for the sun to re-emerge and bless it's inhabitants with wonderful rays, the journey for power had just begun, a beast was yet to awaken. A beast bearing the fate of the 5th division would soon be brought to life.
To be continued...
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Post by Samuel_Carter_Awakening » Wed Apr 10, 2019 8:18 am

Time flew, birds surrounding the asleep beast keeping guard over him or so it was. The lids set to shield his eyes retracted little by little till it opened wide to reveal blue oculars. The young man stood up, dusting his shihakusho and then picking the sheathe that housed Hikari, holding it firmly within the confines of his left palm. Facing a set of trees, his lips expanding to reveal a smile. right hand moving upwards a little, he could feel the surge of power within, the power the devil's craft poured out was fascinating, immediately his palm lightened up with cracks of electricity coursing out from them, size increasing as time flew, remaining in that posture for few seconds. Allowing the craft to fortify itself by fueling more reiatsu. Words he spoke to no one in particular, but sub consciously to the devil, to manifest the art which made its debut from his palm, all aura flowing to the tip of his index finger which pointed forward.

"Hadou 4: Byakurai!!".

With a loud cry. He let out the command, cracking sounds filled the environ and the illumination from the lightning brightened the atmosphere, the bolt moved swiftly, colliding with the set of trees to manifest a rocky explosion, a testament to its destructive power. One thing took away his happiness after seeing his successful attempt, he considered that the captain may go harsh on him for the fact that he had made a mess in the training ground. And without jumping into a conclusion. His physique blurred, leaving behind dust that rose to the atmosphere, a flash step was all it took to produce such feat.

Appearing at the entrance of the academy, head down, his hair and shihakusho dancing to the tune of the wind, he moved forward to receive permission to take a training room for his zanjutsu practice.

Hirazakūra: Konnichiwa!!
Instructor: Konnichiwa.
#The instructor noticed him to be a member of the 5th division due to the badge but kept his calm.

Hirazakūra: Amatoyoshi Hirazakūra. 10th seat of the 5th company. I'll be glad if you could give me a training room here....

Instructor: Of course, follow me.

Hirazakūra followed the man who led him to a slightly big enclave. And before he could speak or thank him, he was gone. Hirazakūra cared less, pushing up his katana from its guard with his thumb, wrapping the hilt with his right fist and forcefully freeing it from its bondage whilst slashing at air before pointing at a pillar, the place was indeed filled with pillars which were not necessarily the standing strength of the building, but were used in place of dummies. Hirazakūra closed his eyes for few minutes, feeling nature's energy while building up his reiatsu. Glistening yellowish aura making their debut from his sweat pores encapsulating him in the process. Setting aback his right hand, legs wide opened, assuming a striking stance, with rage and the voice of a lion, he called out in sync to his swinging motion.

"Nadegiri!!!!"

He had the speed, but lacked the force to fully cut through the pillar, trying again, he assumed the prior stance, legs widened, right arm set aback, with force and speed, he executed another slash, this time, the pillar received only a scar, of course, his blade was coated in reiatsu, but how come only a scar remained from his slash, frustration with rage kicked in, setting his right arm aback again, fueling his strength with rage and anger, he attempted another slice, this time the pillar was spilt diagonally, he sighed and then moved on to the next, he could feel the mini shockwave derived from the prior, he assumed a new stance, legs spread outwards with right arm backwards and left forward, he swung once more fueling his strength with same anger. But this time, the method and word changed.

"Agitowari"

Successful like the prior move. The others were split, falling down on both knees, panting out loud, sweat beads slithering around his face, managing to get up, he initiated a flash step, leaving the room, appearing before the instructor, thanking him first before another flash step, leaving his office in disarray. He appeared at home after several flash steps, landing on his bed, he slept off with one thing in mind. He had successfully mastered "Bakudo 9: Hōrin. Hadou 4: Byakurai. Nadegiri. Agitowari"
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Re: [5th Division] Roses Of Power

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Post by Samuel_Carter_Awakening » Wed Apr 10, 2019 2:30 pm

The crashing noise emanating from the left window made Amatoyoshi Hirazakūra wake up from his early slumber, his ear was sharp enough pick up the sound and his eyes which were set on surveillance were fast enough to catch a silhouette figure moving at quite a nimble pace, immediately he grabbed his blade, initiating a flash step to shorten the distance between both. Appearing before the figure, 2m. He_Hirazakūra shot out his left arm, glistening with white bluish aura and releasing cracking noise, focusing all in a finger tip, he shot out the concentrated mass of electricity upon uttering the command.

"Hadou 4: Byakurai"

This mass which spelt doom, dragging alongside the wrath of hades was aimed at his left rib cage, but fortunately for the intruder, jerking to his right, he evaded the bolt. Said bolt traversed on, striking a tree nearby and halting its airborne journey. The intruder being armed with a blade Hirazakūra knew nothing about sent a diagonal slash towards the left hand side of Hirazakūra almost simultaneously. Hirazakūra moved swiftly, retracting the left and sending forth the right which held tightly his blade, placing it before, horizontally, to parry the slash sent at him, with this successful collision, he could see the face of the child clearly, but it seemed this young one wouldn't go down easily.

Nimble on his feet, using it as an advantage, he withdrew backwards, chanting a spell as he moved, conjuring up reddish electricity which he shot forward after speaking out "Modified Hadou 4: Jūgeki Byakurai". Tho it was fast, it lacked the destructive capability to bring down a seated officer like himself(Hirazakūra). Like a tap, having its knot broken forcefully, Yellowish glistening aura made its debut out of his sweat pores, hardening and clumping to his skin to encapsulate him, forming a sturdy armor for protection. Said red bolt struck it's intended target, creating a mini smokescreen. From within, Hirazakūra forcefully drew out Hikari from its sheathe whilst forcefully slashing the air to part, "Bakudo 9: Hōrin", what followed seemed to be orange hued tendrils with spiralling yellow patterns traversed towards the boy who watched on in awe on how Hirazakūra had taken his devil's craft full on, said mechanism wrapped around him. Following a quick motion stance, widening both legs and setting his right arm aback, his mind scape reflecting what happened prior that day, his training session. His lips parting to release words.

"Nadegiri!!"

Attempting a slash which he purposely allowed to miss it's target, tho it rained it's wrath on the surroundings, His being_Hirazakūra appeared besides the restrained boy and attempted another slash, different in mechanism and name. "Agitowari!!".
The slash did well to tear his skin, bisecting wasn't complete, but it's work was done, leaving the almost lifeless body, knowing fully well the injuries weren't life taking, leaving it as a warning, and he was sure said boy would be able to tend to it. Robbing him_Hirazakūra was definitely a death wish. He moved back to his room, step by step, a good night rest awaited him. And upon successful collision between his body and the comfy material he laid on, he was off, moving far away, not his actual body, but his mind.
°Solo Training Concluded
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Re: [5th Division] Roses Of Power

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Post by Aegis Raiu » Fri Apr 12, 2019 2:27 pm

I had no particular issue regarding how you went about this and the general roleplay quality, however, I feel the true essence of this training was lacking that special touch. Most actions performed by Amatoyoshi, including the final encounter with the thief - which I see only came in to fill up space, was somewhat mediocre but still not all too damning for a 10th seat.

I would then bring to your notice that the two zanjutsu techniques trained here would have to be added to your zanjutsu technique builder separately and would have to be upgraded using CBS soul levels before any form of official use is granted.

The two kido techniques are both already common usable techniques by all Shinigami but has now been trained to better output. Nonetheless, you would still need to improve on your Kido casting stats to better improve the effectiveness of your kido spells generally.

And as such, you are to add the points gotten from the successful training of Hadou #4: Byakurai, Bakudou #9: Horin, Modified Hadou #4: Jugeki Byakuya, Nadegiri and Agitowari to either your kido stats OR to your custom Zanjutsu skills (Nadegiri and Agitowari) when created.

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You have been awarded 2 CBS points for completing this training with a C grade.

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