Shinoda wrote: ↑Sat Jan 12, 2019 12:03 am Re-read what I said. I'm not asking about the mechanic of the Saisho no Unmei ability. I'm asking about the composition of Sansei no Unmei's acid when Saisho no Unmei is is not in use. You say it loiters around your body as a fluid but then you say it's also a vapour. Note that the text is quoted from the Shikai Description section. Not Approved.Indra wrote: ↑Thu Jan 10, 2019 10:34 pmShinoda wrote: ↑Wed Jan 09, 2019 8:37 am5) "In its Shikai, Sansei unmei's blade liquefies into a large pool of highly corrosive acid in molten form, [...] The pool of acid initially drops to the ground, take form of a 'Hydra' (water snake), and then briefly swarm around Promethazine's body like a whirlwind before taking a restive motion. [...] Promethazine can control/manipulate the pool of acid in whatever way he sees fit, allowing him mold or structure it into any desired shape [...] Additionally, as long as Promenthazine's Shikai is active, Sansei unmei passively erects around Promenthazine's entirety, an unarguably condense ash fog made from vapour
OK, that answer leads me into my real point. You're saying in the beginning it loiters around you in the form of a "pool of acid;" in other words, a fluid. Then you later say, it's a "fog made from vapour." Which is it? Is it a fluid state or a vapor state? Or is a select portion of the total liquid acid in the form of the defensive mist that loiters around you, while the rest remains usable for more active purposes? And how freely can you convert the liquid acid between these two states? Is it just an "as desired" thing? Or is it a significant enough change that you need named abilities like this? In addition, what portion is present as fluid vs. vapor when you're not actively converting between them? If you could submit a revision making an answer to these points it's Conditionally Approved.
6) The volume is Approved
2:Alright I will go with Ash white
2.1: Mist will do
5:You are mixing the techniques SANSEI no unmei is different from Saisho no unmei
Saisho no unmei is the second ability that makes condense acidic mist spread while promethazine is in the liquid acid
It's different from the first ability
Please read through the abilities again
I will make a revision very soon
Alright i will change it... is that all?