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Akugaranwa Itachi
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Mission Review Thread

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Post by Akugaranwa Itachi » Sat May 18, 2019 11:21 pm

All mission and spar are to be posted here for review.
> Reviews are to be conducted by Either the Emperor, GrandMaster or an Elite Sternritter.
> External Reviewer can also be consulted with the Permission of the Division Leader first.
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Re: Mission Review Thread

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Post by Tope » Tue Aug 20, 2019 10:03 am

Name: Settling In (Part 1).
Character: August Schneider.
Type: Solo.
Link: Settling In
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Re: Mission Review Thread

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Post by Aegis Raiu » Thu Aug 22, 2019 7:19 am

Tope wrote:
Tue Aug 20, 2019 10:03 am
Name: Settling In (Part 1).
Character: August Schneider.
Type: Solo.
Link: Settling In
I'll handle this 8-)
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Re: Mission Review Thread

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Post by Aegis Raiu » Thu Sep 05, 2019 2:00 pm

Tope wrote:
Tue Aug 20, 2019 10:03 am
Name: Settling In (Part 1).
Character: August Schneider.
Type: Solo.
Link: Settling In
「Review」
As a masterful piece written by the Emperor himself, though lacking any fight scenes I would say I was entertained and it wasn't a boring read. I like the character introduction and the unique choice of roleplay pattern, but I would urge you to extend the length of your roleplays if you won't be adding any engaging action scenes.
Your roleplay and descriptions were all round above average.

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Re: Mission Review Thread

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Post by Zxanders20 » Wed Oct 02, 2019 10:13 am

Character Name: Rèzîlyènt Fluer de dragon
Character Rank: Soldat
Mission Type: Solo
Mission Name: First Mission
Mission Description: He is to capture 2 adjhucas level Hollows with the help of other soldats
Reviewer: [GrandMaster or Elite Sternritter]
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Re: Mission Review Thread

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Post by Phantom-T » Wed Oct 02, 2019 11:55 am

Zxanders20 wrote:
Wed Oct 02, 2019 10:13 am
Character Name: Rèzîlyènt Fluer de dragon
Character Rank: Soldat
Mission Type: Solo
Mission Name: First Mission
Mission Description: He is to capture 2 adjhucas level Hollows with the help of other soldats
Reviewer: [GrandMaster or Elite Sternritter]

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