Although this is not your main character but revealing the CBS stats about him in a spoiler is a wise decision. In truth i didn't even see basic info of your character's Zanpakuto in the spoiler tag and despite the link you submitted which makes me find it a bit difficult to know the true abilities of this your character(presumably your second character).But you sure gave a good description about Nobunaga's zan abilities in the third-to the last paragraph, which shows that you know what to do to convince the reader that you are at the right path. Anyway, i found your roleplay very good it shows that your write-ups is solid and you know what you were doing. However, you made so many errors in using punctuation with few spelling errors but be sure to be careful when doing so in the future or when writing a solo of this nature. And before reading the below comments on your review, be sure not to apply shadows to your text next time...... it became somewhat difficult to read for me.
''Hadō#1, Shō.'' Using the palm of his free left hand, Nobunaga slammed an outburst of raw kinetic energy into the top of the sword's hilt. Due to the introduction of Shō and the peculiarity of its application, the black haired Shinigami's palm basically become an hammer, and the sword itself a makeshift chisel. Hence caused to thrust through the Beast's thickened abdominal muscles with tremendous force, blade tip projecting out the back bleeding crimsoned juice. ''Tsuzuri,'' Brilliant golden sparks ignited down the whole length of the katana held in hand, but not before inviting the entirety of the Werebeast to join in that very electrical festivity. ''Raiden.'' concluded Nobunaga. He watched the creature burn and smelled its fur roast, yet there was no satisfaction in his eyes.
Great tactics! Great use of low level kido…… truly worthy of a keen mind. Indeed your use of kido was well timed in this situation.
However, the immobile beast suddenly acted; with a low growl escaping its lungs, the creature swelled vigorously with spiritual energy just before it pulsed in full body, releasing a massive omnidirectional wave of pale white reiatsu that galloped forth into the surrounding space. The blast caught the dark haired shinigami off guard, knocking him dozens of metres backwards. The sheer force of Nobunaga's instant displacement was such that it immediately sent him crashing through the walls of a building at the extreme of his trajectory_subsequently collapsing the entire structure into slabs and chunks of concrete underneath which he would have been buried.
Rock powder billowed into the atmosphere, clouding it in thick dust. Shortly afterwards, Nobunaga bursted out of the stacked/heaped rubble only to stand atop it with barely a scathe to his person.
However, this is where you got me thinking…….. With the surprised attack executed by the enemy you shouldn’t have come out without having a fracture or damage from that blast due to the momentum and force generated from the blast, yet you came out with barely scathed even if your durability is a bit above average. Do note that you weren’t even protected with your reiatsu when the attack slammed against your body and you seem to ignore the damage which is wrong the way i see it. So how is it that you came out almost unscathed??
; Lobo had already struck out with a clenched fist, pounding hard against the upper back with a resounding bang. At the precise point of impact, the were beast's knuckle brum a brilliant crimson just before discharging an energy blast pointblank. Bala.
The black-haired shinigami should have been sent flying by the impact force of the blast, with a gaping hollow gorged into the chest, but through unidentified means he eventually managed to stand his ground while remaining apparently unscathed. Later distancing himself from Lobo, he came to speak as follows
With the statement bolded in red color, i conlcude that it was your real body that got hit by the fist and also a bala but the description on how you came out unscathed seemed to be vague in this paragraph. But still you should have roleplayed that part well with good details but you didn't which is wrong on your path.However, i see that you did mentioned how your abilities work in the next paragraph and how you survived it. Yet you use the word "Undefined means" which i don't quite understand here.
Above all, this is a solid roleplay one deserving of higher grade since it wasn't one-sided and we saw a lot from the Lobo but the roleplay wasn't concluded well, and this will somewhat affect your grade because we didn't get to see the outcome of the battle nor did we get to see if Nobunaga triumph and became the Hero or whether the beast managed to tip the scales of the battle and flee since Nobunaga had shikai to support him in this battle. Still, i will give this a "B"
grade because the roleplay was done with great length and beyond average despite some errors and mistakes from your part and given with the mistakes i pointed out.