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[Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Itsu » Thu Jan 17, 2019 4:39 pm

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Amongst the abundant assembly of rooms, halls, event centers, and other expanses of Las Noche, lies a chamber rumored to be the birth place of physical combat indoctrination, drills, and several other body building exercises that edified the present day order of assassins. It's floors, walls, and ceilings were masterfully crafted and built to stand firm against indefatigable succession of overpowering attacks capable of disfiguring the settings of conventional training ground during combat processes.
Situated underneath the chasmic floors of the prestigious home of Arrancars, the chamber boasts a large tract of densely brown concrete with foreign markings crested on it.



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Post by Zangetsu » Fri Jan 18, 2019 10:50 am

Kakashi heard the news about a newly recruited Adjuchas named Yagami Raito. "I remember when I was the new guy, good times" Kakashi said laughing lightly. He was appointed by an unknown personnel to accompany the Adjuchas to the training grounds, and assist him with his training. It'll be just like old times, only this time he is not the trainee but one of the trainers, or so he thought. On hearing the news, he was just as excited as he was on the day of his training, and he didn't want to be tardy. So he got up early, freshened up, wore the traditional Arrancar black and white attire, A White hooded jacket with designed black lines, revealing his muscular build and a pair of tight fitted white pants having the same design with the jacket, coupled with a black sneakers. He did some minor arrangements to his apartment, shady looking on the outside, but was actually kind of nice on the inside. The interior of his apartment was painted brown, he has a gold colored sofa sitting at one end of the room, a cupboard at another end and a wooden stool lying in the center of the room. After settling down for a meal, he quickly grabbed his Zanpakuto and strapped it on the left side of his waist. He put on his hood, left his jacket unzipped to reveal the tattoo situated on the left side of his chest. He left the apartment, locking the door behind him. He rushed immediately, heading to the direction of the training grounds. He ran for a while, before seeing a building with the description he was given. When he got in, the arena had an eery feel, it had chains hanging from the ceiling, very few windows, the walls and floor had a foreign intricate design and at the edges of the arena, he saw diamond like objects glowing and floating atop something looking like an altar. He rested on a wall just besides the entrance and awaited the new recruit and the other person in charge of the training.
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Re: [Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Danty » Thu Jan 24, 2019 8:21 am

Yagami was sitting in his garden drinking rice wine with a tankōbon in his left hand when he heard a knock on the door.... He picked up his gold coated katana then peeked through the keyhole. He saw a fair young man with long spiky white hair wearing a black tank top with camo shorts carrying a black bag...
Yagami slightly opened the door and talked to the young man... Apparently he was a mailman and he had a letter for yagami... The letter was delivered late because the mailman had a hard time finding yagami's address since he lived at the other end of Las noche..
Yagami bid the mailman farewell and closed the door, then he sat down in his gold coloured sofa which was by the side of the door.. He opened the letter and after reading the letter, there was shock in his face since the letter said his training had begun and he was already few hours late...
He rushed to the wardrobe which was at the end of the room, he took a red leather jacket which he hung on his shoulder, he took the remaining bottle of sakē all in one gulp, wore a white sneakers, picked up his katana with its scabbard and left the house for the training grounds which wasn't too far from where he lived...
Minutes later, he arrived at the training grounds which looked exactly as it was described in the letter... He entered the building and saw chains hanging out the ceiling, some glowing crystal like objects glowing and floating... He noticed the mechanics on the walls of the arena and wondered what they were for...
Yagami was still observing the arena when he heard a voice from behind him. "You must be the new guy" said by a tall muscular guy with blue eyes and a scar running down his left eye wearing a white hoodie and a sword on his waist...
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Re: [Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Itsu » Thu Feb 07, 2019 10:03 am

I'm sorry for taking too long to reply this thread. RL kicked in hard but I think I'll be stable for now.
@Danty, It's obvious you're new to this as I saw a couple of loosed ends in post. First off I'll credit you for showcasing your cognizance of some of the basics of role playing. For someone new to this, it's a good start. But id recommend you work on your spacing. Learn to use paragraphs when writting, as it not only keeps your writting under control, but as well gives readers better understand of the point you're trying to make in that particular set(s) of expressions.

I'd use this medium to call to your notice that making your character do things he didn't feel, see, or experience is bad. Just because you as a role player saw something on a poster's writeup, maybe an action made, that doesn't mean your character saw or felt it. If he wasn't there when something was done, you shouldn't account for it in your post. The point I'm trying to make is, only account for things your character saw, felt, or experienced.

Don't feel bad okay, you're doing well. Just try to take note of my points as we progress further. Be free and have fun

Chest rising and falling rhythmically, slow breathing, deeply asleep, body system in search of full recovery from a tense training exercise that occured days ago at the White sand sea. The daughter of Briggs slept at almost any given time of the day in other to fully get back lost strength. But then on one sunny morning, a resonating beeping sound from her cell phone interrupted one of her beauty sleeps.

Her dream ended abruptly, as she was shaken back into reality. Her blue eyes opened, eyelashes faintly batting against her lids when she blinked. She woke to soft sheets, and the morning light trickled in through the blinds. Shedding her of the remaining glimpses of the dream, her eyes were still shut as she soaked in the warmth of her covers before letting her blue eyes see the sun's rays.

Everything was blurry. For a second, she didn't know who or where she was. She didnt know how she got in the bed, or how got into the clothes she saw. Then, everything was processed. She realized she was in her room. The thing above her was the ceiling. The thing on top of her was a pink duvet. The thing underneath her was the pillow and mattress. The queen could see everything clearly now. She slowly sat up, debating whether or not she should get up. Her muscles still felt a bit weak. Thereafter she let out an exasperated sigh, groaning as she rolled off her bed she had once occupied.

"What time is it? What could be the problem now? Why now, why?"

All of those questions shot through her mind as she let out a loud yawn, stretched like cat before picking up her phone to read the notification she received.

Moments after gazing focusly into the device, Anya's facial expression tangled into a frenzy of disgust. The Intel she received not only ruined her sleep but triggered a mood swing almost immediately. She heated up. But then again, in as much as her body wasn't willing to move, her mind which was solely devoted to her Espada made her struggle her way to freshing up and do other necessities that would prepare her against the upcoming assignment at hand.

A couple of hours had swung by since Anya received the notification, but then it was in the fourth hour that her majesty presence was sighted in the chamber of the ancients. With a single push, she opened the door to the training ground. A familiar place it was as she had selectively picked out a couple of times to edify her abilities in this very place. A chamber half the size of a standard football pitch, with markings encrypted all over it's walls and floors for beautification purposes. A place the queen herself have tested and trusted it's overwhelming sturdiness towards attacks, blasts, and all sorts of ravaging impacts; a mystery left to unfold in time.

She moved. As she did, she loosened up her walk without exaggerating the swing of her hips. Majestically placing one foot in front of the other accompanied with long strides. The queen allowed her arms to hang at her sides, and kept them relaxed.

Such glamorous strides it would seem, something humans would classify as a cat's walk. With her long ever dark hairs cooperating with her seductive movements, the queen made sure to shut the gates of her colossal Reiryoku in other not to kill her students in seconds.

Back in time before she made an appearance in the chamber of ancients, Anya's senses picked up the insignificant scraps of Reiryoku signatures dwelling within the arena, one of which she has good knowledge of.

It was after she got to the center of the arena that the queen made a U-turn that would allow her eyes properly catch the view of both legionaires.

After taking a good look at both individuals, she would say.

"Oiiii.....!!!"

"Katashi! Yagami! I'm Anya, I've been stationed to show you the ropes around basic battle movements, skill, and several other experiences that comes along with such exercise. I'd advice you work together if you want to step out of this alive...... Do well to come at me with all you've got if you wish to attain that which you came here to achieve....."

"You'd be mistaken if you think id go easy on you two..." she said with her eyes widened; a cold gaze that boldly portrayed a bullet waiting for the pull of a trigger to unleash mayhem on it's target. A simple hand gesture would be made signaling them to attack.
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Re: [Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Zangetsu » Fri Feb 08, 2019 4:53 pm

Not long after Katashi had arrived at the training grounds, the new guy going by the name Yagami also showed up. He walked into the training grounds wearing a red jacket, a pair of black and white sneakers. He looked like an average human, standing somewhat close to 6ft. A distinctive feature one would notice, was his white hair and bloody red eyes. He watched as Yagami scoured the room, as he called from behind him. "You must be the new guy...... Yagami Raito...if I'm not mistaking? I'm Katashi.... Pleasure to make your acquaintance". Not long after, The door flung wide open and a tall slender feminine figure walked majestically into the training grounds, with her long black hair flowing behind her. She got to the center of the room, before making a U turn to face Katashi and Yagami.

She wore a long sleeved, black and white jacket that stops at the point where her lowest rib is situated, which revealed a number of well-spaced black bands covering her midsection. A white pleated skirt that stops just at her knees, enabling her free, fast, and flexible movement. And a pair of black heeled boots reaching a height just below the skirt. It was the famed Anya Briggs, Head Fraccione to Lord Vicenzo. She stared at Yagami and Katashi with her stern looking blue eyes before saying.........

Oiiii.....!!!"

"Katashi! Yagami! I'm Anya, I've been stationed to show you the ropes around basic battle movements, skill, and several other experiences that comes along with such exercise. I'd advice you work together if you want to step out of this alive...... Do well to come at me with all you've got if you wish to attain that which you came here to achieve....."

"You'd be mistaken if you think id go easy on you two..."
And with that, she signalled them that the training session has begun.

"I'll go in first, I'll be the bait. When you spot a chance, swoop in and deal as much damage as you can. It's not going to be easy she's way out of our league.... But we have to try.." Katashi whispered Yagami. Katashi then unstrapped the sheath of his Zanpakuto from his waist, and gripped it in his hand. He charged at Anya, and when he was just a few meters from her, he thrust his Zanpakuto, while still in it's sheath at her, and then immediately stopped his arm a few meters away from her face which the blade to slip out of its sheath. The hilt of his Zanpakuto would make it's way to her face, and upon impact, Katashi would deliver a kick to her midsection with enough force to send her flying backwards. He would then unsheathe his Zanpakuto, holding the sheath in his right hand, and the blade in his left.
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Re: [Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Danty » Wed Feb 13, 2019 4:31 am

While Yagami still scoured the arena, he heard a voice from behind "You must be the new guy...... Yagami Raito...if I'm not mistaking? I'm Katashi.... Pleasure to make your acquaintance".
While the two were getting to know each other, they were suddenly disrupted when the door flung open and a slender feminine figure with long black hair walked in the arena. Yagami and katashi watched the lady in her long sleeved black and white jacket that stops at the point where her lowest rib is situated and A white pleated skirt that stops just at her knees, enabling her free, fast, and flexible movement, walk majestically to the center of the arena before making a U turn to face the two.
She stared hard at yagami and katashi before saying
"Oiiii.....!!!"

Katashi! Yagami! I'm Anya, I've been stationed to show you the ropes around basic battle movements, skill, and several other experiences that comes along with such exercise. I'd advice you work together if you want to step out of this alive...... Do well to come at me with all you've got if you wish to attain that which you came here to achieve....."

"You'd be mistaken if you think id go easy on you two..."

And made a hand signal which meant the training has begun.

Katashi whispered to yagami "I'll go in first, I'll be the bait. When you spot a chance, swoop in and deal as much damage as you can. It's not going to be easy she's way out of our league.... But we have to try.."
Katashi unstrapped his zanpakuto from his waist then he dashed at Anya, and thrust his sheathed zanpakuto in a way the blade would slip out and the hilt would make way to her face..
Seeing the move made by his comrade, yagami thought this as an opportunity to make his move. Using sonido he would disappear and then reappear above Anya with his zanpakuto already unsheathed, holding it in both hands he would use La Torrente to make consecutive slashes on Anya's neck region
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Re: [Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Itsu » Sun Feb 17, 2019 10:59 am

Her eyes sparkled with anticipation after gesticulating a 'come at me' signal to her students in the training ground. She'd be pleased to watch them try to execute cooperative attacks, rely on each other's tactitics, or combine deceitful techniques in other to steal a couple of fatal hits on her. That was her wish at the moment, at least for that very moment.

Data kept flooding her brain cogs as her pesquisa transmitted series of information which includes; spiritual energy patterns, locomotion of kinetic energy within the arena, Reiryoku signatures, and the likes. Her mind was her weapon, working almost on par with a modernized mapping computer processor, broadcasting data in all its forms into Anya's perspicacious mind.

She felt it. That sudden increase in energy converging around Katashi's support appendages. It came to her understanding that the young fellow was about making use of his feet, and then he sprinted towards her a second later. She watched his every step, while he paced, the queen's eyes captured and registered his sprint patterns in her mind, his locomotive maneuverability was slow and direct; no hidden spices to it. It was when he was at the verge of covering the remaining 5 meters distance between them that the behemoth size Numero made a blunt thrust with his scabbard, threatening to use the hilt of his blade to smack her in the face.

During the time of the attack, Anya's eyes memorized the forward thrust while simultaneously sensing the adjuchas taking off in sonido. In a single thought process, she would swiftly hazard a guess that both teammates aimed to corner her, using Katashi as some sort of distraction.

But all would soon go downhill as Anya wasn't born yesterday. Her experience in countless battles fought over the years surpassed the piece of offering held out by her students. Nevertheless, she must first issue punishment to a naive Numero for freely displaying the hilt of his blade to an enemy.

Just as the hilt of the blade partially stretched towards her face, Anya would hastily make a backward somersault, by using both hands to support her body weight on the ground before landing back on her feet. Meanwhile, just as her hands made contact with the floor, her legs would calcitrate the Numero's stretched out wrist thereby causing him to lose the grip on his blade, which would send it flying upwards into midair.

An ill-fated situation it would turn out to be for the young adjuchas who appeared above Anya seconds after she made the flip. Before he would poise himself in midair to attack, he would be welcomed with a rotating blade already inches away from his lower abdomen. If nothing was done about it, it would narrowly take a dip into Yagami's abdomen. After making the flip, Anya would simultaneously perform a single jump backwards before pointing at the behemoth looking Numero, sniping a bala that would race passed his left ear at an alarming speed.

"Next one will fly three inches to the left......"
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Post by Zangetsu » Mon May 20, 2019 8:07 am

Just as Katashi had plunged his blade forward to strike at Anya, she swiftly flipped backwards, kicking Katashi's arm upward, causing him to lose grip on his Zanpakuto and sending the blade flying upward, heading straight for Yagami. "Oh__" before he could complete his statement, a bright crimson ball of light heading his way caught his attention. His eye widened with shock but before he could act, it had already whizzed pass him, inches away from his ear. __shit.

Now facing Anya, he would hear"Next one will fly three inches to the left......", which would make him regain his composure. "{Scoffs} Show off... Katashi said..... Obviously pissed, but not surprised. At the level at which Anya is, it would be a miracle if we land a hit on her. After all she is Anya Briggs.....Head Fraccione to Vicenzo Diablo. One of the Demon twins, and one of the most feared and respected Arrancars in Hueco Mundo. You would expect nothing less from one who trained under Vicenzo.

Katashi, now out of his world of thought, with a new found plan in mind charges once more at Anya. Though the chances of him landing a nice clean hit on Anya are pretty slim, he still goes on ahead with this new found plan of his. Hoping that Yagami would know what to do should the plan fail. Dashing at Anya at a steady pace, forming a Cero in his left hand and a Bala in his right. When he gets to his preferred distance of attack, which is a few metres away from Anya, he would fire the Cero at her not hoping for it to deal damage, but hoping she would dodge it.

If she should dodge it, he would use Sonido to follow her to where ever she would go, and from a distance which he is certain she can't dodge and attack him like the last time, he would fire the Bala in his right hand. Should she still dodge this attack, Katashi would leave the rest to Yagami, hoping he would have a back up plan that anchors with his.
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Re: [Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Danty » Wed Jun 05, 2019 2:40 am

Just as yagami was about to make his attack on Anya from above, she swiftly flipped backward, kicking katashi's arm which sent his sword flying upward, directly towards yagami. Seeing the sword coming at him, yagami makes a swift turn away from it, but before he could complete the turn, the blade had made a piffling cut on his left upper abdomen. Thrown off balace by the turn and the cut, yagami was soon seen falling to the ground.

In mid-air, yagami caught a glimpse of katashi's move on Anya, which ended too soon as she sent a ball of light which almost took his left ear off... ''How the hell could one person obviate consecutive attacks in just one move, without stress, it was almost as if she knew their every move'' yagami said...Now he knew what katashi meant when he said she was way out their league.

Few metres before crashing to the ground, yagami would spot his comrade going for another attack and in this moment, with his zanpakuto in his left hand, he would send an abrupt cero with his right hand, aimed at anya's arm with the purpose of distracting her and should this move be successful, katashi might just be able to make a successful attack on her.
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Post by Itsu » Thu Jun 06, 2019 4:32 am

@Zangetsu, I'm surprised to see that you didn't attempt to get back your blade. Anyways that isn't really relevant since we Arrancars don't really need our blades to activate first release.

That aside.

You aren't actually utilizing your stats very well.. If you were, you'd notice your focus should be taijutsu (hand to hand combat). Katashi definitely has strength leverage over Anya, and I expected you to have gone through our stats to find weaknesses and exploit it.

You both need to put heads together to mastermind a plan to pin Anya down so you can execute lethal damage on her.

Lastly, you both need to keep your detailing in check. Learn not to give account of important things so the readers would be carried along.
First blood drawn.

An unfavourable stunt pulled by the inexperienced freshers costed Yagami a teensy-weensy splosh of blood that trailed in the air as Katashi's katana hurtled shortly before gravitating towards the concrete floor. Meanwhile, the herculean looking Numero who already had a cicatrix disfiguring the left side of his face was shown a bit of leniency as a ball of bala eased passed him in one shake of a lamb's tail. It was easily perceived that the queen's hesitation to dig a hole right through Katashi's brainpan was a gesture of mercy towards her student. However, such feat of mercy from the queen occur once in a blue moon.

Her warning to the creature before her breezed out of her lips and faded with the wind. Absent-mindedly, Anya twirled a strand of hair round her fingers as she grinned from ear to ear in expectance of more amusement from the duos.

It didn't take long before Katashi shrugged of the feeling of momentary fear which she saw in his eyes and poised himself once more. But right in that very slim time frame after the Numero positioned himself, a couple of pronouced occurrence failed to escape Anya's perception.

Her eyes widened, and in a brisk moment not more than a millisecond, she felt the expansion of kinetic energy that rapidly increased in both of his leg muscles, and also the accelerated change in flow of spiritual energy which gradually converged at the center of his palms.

Just as she picked up those pulses, an instantaneous verdict of action registered in Anya's mind. Without a doubt she immediately perceived that the Numero was about to make use of his feet, coupled with a cero onslaught from both palms.

And then he paced forward.

At that moment, those were the available changes in his body system that her senses tracked, and would continually update her of any preexisting data as pulses repeatedly hit the walls of her skull.

Following that piece of data came the changing ebb of spiritual energy converging around Yagami's right palm, who happened to be crashing down to the ground after been clipped by his partner's blade. For a woman who fought many battles over time, monitoring the energy activities in both individuals was a feat mastered a long time ago, as such, she didn't find difficulty distinguishing what was what. It would take much more than just that to befuddle the queen's composure or attentiveness.

Getting to a distance not more than two arms length away from Anya's position, the Numero made a short-term halt before launching a ball of crimson energy from his right hand which was stretched outward facing the queen. Meanwhile, a red coloured cero belonging to injured Yagami also raced towards Anya's direction the exact same period the Numero released his.

On the spur of the moment, her legs heated up. A well gifted observer would notice as the wind around her shifted as she geared on some speed that would dart her body weight to her left-hand side, which allowed the ball of crimson energy to bolt it's way passed Anya's right side. Yagami's cero would also accompany his partner's cero down to the extreme end of the chamber before flaunting a mild detonation.

On the dot of her first spurt of speed, with a cero laced feet, Anya would unhesitatingly make an additional dash that would jolt her towards Katashi and deliver a pointblank side kick to his rib cage, thereby preventing the supposed purpose of the generated energy from his left palm. She made sure the might of the kick would crush some bones if it doesn't meet a sturdy abdominal fortidude. Been caught off-guard by a Fracción of Anya's caliber would make evading the kick doubtful, or maybe not. But should impact be made, her left foot coupled with sheer force from the speed, would prompt Katashi to stagger a step or two before tumbling over and over on the concrete floor.

With both legionaires lying down on the ground in pains, one at about 10 meters to her right, while the other 7 meters in front of her, Anya would say

"Your resolve is weak.....!!!!!"

"The Order of assassins weep for having weaklings on it's list....."

"Come oooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!"

[spoiler]Patada de Cero ("Zero kick"):The user's leg heats up as the cero surrounds the leg and when it hits/touches/interacts with other objects it burns the part hit and makes the impact of the kick stronger. It also possess damaging effects on the inside of the opponent, somewhat heating it up causing pain on the injured part. I may get weaker if useda lot by the user. Will gradually start to burn the leg. It can also be discharged in the form of a projectile.[/spoiler]
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Re: [Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Zangetsu » Tue Jun 25, 2019 12:04 pm

Katashi watched as his blade zipped past Yagami, tearing mildly into his side warm blood now spraying out of his wound as he fell to the ground. Katashi fires his Cero at Anya after running a few meters forward, Yagami fires his own Cero almost immediately before falling to the ground. Anya dodges easily by moving rapidly to the left as both Cero whizzed past and exploded a few meters behind her.

Wind currents around her now shifting, with a burst of speed she raced for Katashi, Using a technique known as 'Patada De Cero' which the user is able to form a Cero around his/her feet. Speed still increasing, she made another short burst of speed towards Katashi's, making her even faster than before, she dishes a devastating side kick to his rib cage, which sends him flying, sending the Bala in his hand flying off and exploding upon contact with the ceiling causing chains to fall off.

Another attack failed.
Katashi now on one knee coughing up and spitting out blood, winced as he stood up and staggered towards one of the fallen chains. He wrapped one end around his palms and holds it out like a whip. He then takes deep cool and calming breaths hoping to ease the pain from the blow he was just dealt. Normal attacks won't work on her, obviously. He needs to out think and out wit her, catching her off guard is the only way he can manage to land a hit. He took a few long strides towards his Zanpakuto and picked it up from the ground before he turned to face Anya thanking the stars that she didn't attack him whilst he wasn't ready. That would have been really bad for him.

He let out a primal cry commonly known as Hollow cry, hoping to temporarily paralyze Anya as he ripped open a garganta behind her summoning a hollow to hold her in place and another hollow to shoot out leaches that explode upon coming in contact with the target. Not finished, he suddenly released his reiatsu, bending the wind in it's wake spreading far and wide, which in turn caused small cuts on Anya's skin. He moved back swiftly far away from her knowing even if his attacks are successful it would do no more than slow her down. Performing those barrage of attacks has used up almost all of his reiatsu. He takes a defensive stance and waits......

Hollow's Cry:(Reitsu Control Stat: E–E+) The Adjucas taps into his primal urges and unleashes a bone-chilling scream, designed to inspire fear into his opponent. Its most effective in a cone, emanating from the mouth. The more reiatsu used, the larger the area. A direct hit can leave the target paralyzed in fear temporarily. The stronger the opponent, the weaker the effect.

Atrapamiento De Hueco:(Reitsu Control Stat: D–D+)(Hollow entrapment)
A Garganta is formed somewhere close to the opponent, and a Hollow emerges with tentacles that attempt to wrap around the opponent and tangle them, if not bindthem. The Hollow itself is possible to be killed, thus ending the technique, although it is a high-level Hollow. However, it does not fight back if it were to be attacked.

Garganta Technique - Artillery-(Reitsu Control Stat: E–E+)
Upon a garganta opening it shoots out leeches out that attach to anything they hit, making them extremely hard to get off. They explode after a set time. Power level of explosion depends on the user. Mid-leveled technique.

El Ultimo Aliento De Los Hueco:(Reitsu Control Stat: D–D+)("Hollows last breath") User releases their reiatsu in sudden burst, causing wind to come out spreading pretty wide depending on the user enough to push the opponent away and cause small cuts, if the user wants to he/she can makeit move a little at the cost of a little more reiatsu, low level technique.
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Re: [Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Danty » Sat Jun 29, 2019 6:23 pm

Yagami soon crashed to the ground seconds after firing a cero with his right hand. The adjuchas now on the floor, sparsely bleeding yet suffering immense pain from the blade of his comrade, used his zanpakuto as support, he knelt with one knee and took off the red leather jacket he was wearing, he noticed the cut wasn't as deep as he thought, for the jacket received most of the blade. "Good thing i bought quality material" he said to himself as he fastened the sleeves of the red jacket to his upper abdomen in hope it'll hold up the wound and stop the bleeding.

Soon after solving his bleeding situation, Yagami heard a loud explosion far off the room, he raised his head to face the direction from where the explosion came,but his eyes caught attention of katashi being sent to a far end of the room after recieving a side kick to his rib cage. He watched his comrade slowly stand while coughing out blood, his sight filled with awe as he turned his head to gaze at Anya, he heard her say,
"Your resolve is weak.....!!!!!"
"The Order of assassins weep for having weaklings on it's list....."
"Come oooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!"

The word weakling kept repeating in his head as he stood, holding his unsheated zanpakuto in his right hand, face down, his white hair which was already stained with blood covering one of his eyes as the other glared red from a distance. With the feeling of fear discarded, He would say to her after taking two steps forward "weaklings?, We may not be up to your standards, neither do we match your fighting skills and intelligence but we are not weaklings!!

Soon after saying those words, he would raise his head with a slight devilish smirk plastered on his face and dash forward, dragging his zanpakuto on the floor. While running, he would raise his left index finger pointing at anya's chest, before sniping a bala at her. "This is gon' take a huge toll on me but I just hope it's worth it" he said to himself before using a sonido technique that leaves behind a life-like after image. Leaving the after image running in the same direction as he was, he would appear few meters above her, raising his right hand with his zanpakuto in it, before releasing a bone-chilling scream, one designed to inspire fear into its victims, but knowing someone of her calibre, that trick alone won't work. Within his left hand, a bright red ball would be formed as he said aloud CERO!! and on releasing the ball aimed for anya's head, he would shout again CERO!!!!. As the red ball of light went down on the head fraccion, Yagami would soon follow, with his zanpakuto in both hands and putting all of his weight as he descended down, with aim of cutting anya from her chin down to her chest.
Gemelos Sonido (Twin Sound Ceremony):The user can perform Sonido at an increased pace and leave behind life-like after-images. These act as clones, otherwise indistinguishable from the user themselves. They can even bleed and die! The user can utilize up to 5 such clones at the same time. It is much more taxing to perform Gemelos Sonido than ordinary Sonido and would tire me twice as fast.

Hollow's Cry:(Reitsu Control Stat: E–E+) The Adjucas taps into his primal urges and unleashes a bone-chilling scream, designed to inspire fear into his opponent. Its most effective in a cone, emanating from the mouth. The more reiatsu used, the larger the area. A direct hit can leave the target paralyzed in fear temporarily. The stronger the opponent, the weaker the effect.

Agitowari("Chin/Jaw Splitting"): A sword technique wherea single sword attack cuts an opponent in half from the jaw down the length of the body until the target is bi-sectioned. The user cuts down with both hands coming from straight above. The tip of the sword enters the chin and then proceeds to open up an opponent's neck and chest. This technique requires being airborne and coming down with their full weight.
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Re: [Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Itsu » Fri Jul 05, 2019 8:52 am

Hey guys! There are certain things I'd like to address in your respective posts. I'd start with @Zangetsu.

The first issue is the presence of present tenses registered all over your writeup. The use of past tense(s) is key in roleplaying. I instructed you on why and how to make use of past tenses via pm, but I can still see lots of sentences that suffered from that flaw. For an action about to be done, the word would can be used before the verb. The word will wouldn't sound proper, because would is the past-tense form of will. And that isn't the only function of would. It helps prevent godmoding. I.e the act of stating something occured to your opponent without giving him/her the chance to counter.

It was sighted here
which in turn caused small cuts on Anya's skin.
This is the right time to use would.

Correction:
which in turn would cause small cuts on Anya's skin.

Please do well to keep track of that in your writeups.

Secondly......
He took a few long strides towards his Zanpakuto and picked it up from the ground before he turned to face Anya thanking the stars that she didn't attack him whilst he wasn't ready.
That is also wrong. I could call this puppeteering because you tactically controlled Anya's movement by stating she didn't move. You're only entitled to state your movements and that which your opponent stated that he/she made. You can only do such when you have an ability that binds a target. Take note.
Example: You shouldn't say Anya danced when she didn't dance. You shouldn't say she drew her blade when I stated in my post that she sat on the floor, or maybe I stated she jumped up, then maybe you tried to flavour your post and then stated she jumped and drew her blade. No, it's wrong, okay?

@Danty You used a sonido technique that which your character shouldn't be able to do due to the fact that your character boast a 'D' speed stats. That's wrong okay. Try not to exceed the limits of your CBS and stay within it.

Temporarily stooped on one knee, the numero blessed with a macho physique involuntarily expelled series of noisy air from his lungs, accompanied by drops of blood that spattered on his cloths, and knees with each violent expulsion of air. The cough sounded loose and wet, a testament to how severe the queen's hit was. He reeled his way to one of the interconnected rings of metal, managed to loosen it, before enfolding it on his hand in an act of weaponizing himself to face queen Anya once more.

Presumingly certain an Arrancar of Katashi's caliber would be conditioned with pains aching from his ribs which was visited by her cero laced kick, the queen threw a frivolous smile at his resolve. From the gentle intake and outbreathe of air by the fellow in white hooded jacket now designed with sprinkles of blood, the queen could've sworn his reaction to the hit would be a loud scream of pain, however, his facial muscles said otherwise. His complexion remained calm and matt as he struggled to muster up strength, his eyes as steady as if he were shopping for shoes, the lad looked like he wanted to prove something to her, or so she thought.

Without further ado, she gently returned her gaze to his counterpart Yagami who got up on his feet in the same fashion, but he was a bit energetic than the latter. She watched as both legionaires poised themselves to launch an attack, meanwhile Yagami slowly covered the gap between him and Anya by pacing forward. In the process he made utterances. From the tone of his voice and words that fled his lips, it was obvious he was offended that the queen sissified his essence.

Before the queen could challenge him by telling him to back up his words with action, she was interrupted by Katashi's movement as he made strides towards his blade and picked it up. But that wasn't the actual reason behind her additional focus. It was the sudden surge of spiritual energy converging around Katashi's stomach area that zipped her words from exiting her lips. An attack was eminent. If she was going to outlive the attack by her pupils, she would need to sharpen her mental focus even more. And so she did. She concentrated her pulses on both individuals as they began to chisel their move on stone.

As Yagami's blade screeched on the highly durable floor, Katashi gave in to his beastly instincts and let loose a high pitched noise rumored to have some level of paralysis that breezed towards Anya's direction. It was a technique common amongst middle class hollows. To Anya, he was just been a crybaby waiting to be babysitted. He should know such technique would have no effect on Anya, or maybe he underestimated her throne as queen.

Just as he cried out loud, a Garganta tore right behind her. Not loosing a second to the wind, Anya imperceptibly vanished in sonido, only to appear standing not too far from the exit door.

The moment she appeared, her eyes witnessed a ball of bala race into two hollows exiting the Garganta even before they fully stepped foot outside the portal. That wasn't all, she saw as Yagami appeared right above the position she previously occupied, unfortunately for him he appeared the exact same time when a wild gust of wind ravaged it's way in that same direction.

"That must be from Katashi." she said as she watched how both individuals would battle against their respective attacks.
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Re: [Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Zangetsu » Fri Jul 19, 2019 9:41 am

Katashi watched from the corner of his eye, as his comrade Yagami rose to his feet, saying "weaklings?, We may not be up to your standards, neither do we match your fighting skills and intelligence but we are not weaklings!!.His lips curved into a devilish smile as he began his attacks.

Hey Raito You shouldn't let things like that bother you. She's trying to make you lose your cool and in a battle such as this, once you get agitated you become an easy target. You've got to focus solely on the task at hand..Got that?.....
Those were the words that slipped through Katashi's lips as the smoke and dust from their consecutive barrage of attacks began to settle a witty smile now evident plastered his face in hopes of lightning the mood.

He walked cautiously to the area where Anya should be. When the smoke had finally dispersed, he was shocked at what he saw or rather what he didn't see. He expected to see Anya a bloody mess with ripped clothing, but instead there was no one there.
What the..... His eye widened as realization dawned on him. He turned to Yagami as his facial expression, now a dreadful one conveyed to him what he had just seen.

During the course of his attacks, he knew something shady was going on. He had his doubts on the success of the attacks. If they were to be successful, he would have heard a scream or heavy breathing from Anya, but there was none.
Terror evidently shown in his eyes as he scanned the Arena.
There..... his pesquisa pinpointed her location before his eyes did. No way.... But how?...... He saw her not too far from the exit of the building. There she was, looking immaculate. No injuries sustained, not even a scratch.
Was it a Sonido? How long has she been there?...... She could have attacked us, or worse...... No matter. I'd just have to find a way to hit her regardless of the outcome, I must.
Katashi poised himself once more for an attack. He extended the whip and flung it towards Anya, aiming for her neck. The whip would then wrap around Anya's neck, as Katashi would pull with enough force to send her flying towards him. He would swing his sword hand upwards and slash down at Anya once she's in range.
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Re: [Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Danty » Mon Jul 29, 2019 7:07 am

Seconds after releasing the cero formed in his left hand, yagami came down with rage in his eyes and high killing intent in his blade which could be felt by anyone in close range. In the midst of the smoke and dust caused by the cero he released, He landed with a roar while slashing his blade at Anya. His eyes widened as the strangest thing happened when he attacked, he felt no resistance, it felt like he just cut through air and the sound made from his sword clashing against the floor made it clear to him that he really did cut through air. In that moment, he felt katashi's reiatsu rise, turning his head to his comrade's direction, he felt something coming his way, from the howling sound he heard, it seemed like wind but his instincts told him it was something far worse than wind.
As the wind raged towards his direction, the adjucha without hesitation altered his form, becoming somewhat of a shadow. In this shadow form, he sunk into the ground and made his way to katashi while manoeuvring the wild wind.
Seconds later, yagami emerged onto the surface, now reverted to a physical form. He stood behind his comrade, watching blood drip from his hand down to the tip of his sword. Ah... Guess I couldn't evade em all he said to himself before hearing katashi say Hey Raito You shouldn't let things like that bother you. She's trying to make you lose your cool and in a battle such as this, once you get agitated you become an easy target. You've got to focus solely on the task at hand..Got that?.
Yagami watched katashi as he walked into the smoke and dust which already started dissipating. When the smoke fully disappeared, yagami saw katashi turn to him with an awful look on his face. I had that same look a while ago, he said to katashi. Seeing katashi scour for anya with his eyes,Over there he said as he pointed his sword at the door which they entered the room from. At the door was Anya, relaxed she was, it seemed she enjoyed watching the attacks meant for her go futile.
"Oii, katashi, I think we should stay back for a while, make attack plans, seeing her over there, she looks pretty relaxed. I think she'd mind giving us a couple minutes". Sheathing his sword in its scabbard, he hung it behind him then puts both hands on his knees before turning to Anya to say "ma'am, mind giving us a couple seconds. You know, catch our breaths, make attack plans, make this training little more FUN."
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Re: [Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Itsu » Tue Aug 27, 2019 3:14 am

I apologize for the delay. I got hooked by RL's flipside.
Back against the wall, temperature rising, with a smile plastered on her face, the ghostly beauty folded her arms across her chest and glared at both legionaires as they sorted out the little mix up at their end. Even though they weren't guitarists, one way or the other they were able to pull some strings that aided the prevention of taking a bite off rotten luck. They survived the clash with a teensy-weensy bit of luck, so she thought.

Meanwhile as Katashi came to the startling realization that Anya had wriggled out of what he must've made himself believe to be a mousetrap, his face shimmered with intense fear. His facial expression told it all. It looked like he was sure as hell their attack would hit the spot. But that single act of uneasiness, giving room for trepidation to place him in a state of dismay was what Anya had hoped to pound out of them, because as a member of Las Noche, amongst the few chosen to be assasins for the creed of Arrancars, in battle situations such as this, displaying the aforementioned act would only prove to be a show of weakness, an inlet for the enemy to surge through. A sharp thinking foe could capitalize on that tiny fragment of panic which may offer him/her some sort of leverage in a battle. That is why Anya would always keep a poker face when faced with the most consternating situations to avoid exhibiting traits of weakness to her adversary.

Nevertheless, they managed to see through the intended collision of attacks; sharp. But the sequence and algorithm of their attacks from the birth of the training came with no difference. Katashi, the frontliner, happened to always be the first to storm forward to initiate an array of physical assault intended to cause damages, while Yagami on the other hand acted as a support class type of fighter, dutied with the responsibility of backing up his counterpart with reinforced strikes to aid the successful completion of their combination attacks. It was quite easy to decipher after a couple attempts on the queen.

Hoping they would exploit the distance and brief time Anya gave to them to restrategies or come up with something a bit more tactical in their next chain of attack, instead embittered words came from the adjuchas which were rancid enough to turn one's stomach if it were food. Perplexed by the utterances made by the youngling, Anya felt her unprententious attitude towards her pupils were abused. She realized if she continued to go soft with her pupils, they may end up being weak and unworthy to be amongst the assasins of Las Noche.

It was in that moment she directed a cold gaze towards the trainees, she unfolded her arms and immediately posed a fighting stance with dark hairs dangling behind her. However, before she kicked into overdrive, a state where her movements would become drastically heightened by the heating adrenaline pumping through her veins.

In that moment things would appear slowed in her eyes, the wind would die off, you know that kind of state where the wind would go silent, leaving any nearby flag to fall to the pole. She no longer heard the sound of anything within the chamber or noticed as Katashi gradually released the entangled chains from his hand preparing to attack. To her they were as if in a photograph, two dimensional and static.

In those frozen seconds of time, Anya's mind would feed off that erupting urge to instill discipline in her pupils, and in the next moment, everything would play back to normal. Movements no longer static, from the breeze flooding from the window openings atop the chamber walls, to the smell of blood reeking in the air, everything moved as it should. But then came a flying chain few inches to her neck from her left side.

Already adrenaline coursed through her system unchecked, urging her to move hastily. She was more awake than she's ever been, with that, she would instinctively lower her head which would allow the chain to whizz pass her. Just as she did, like an athlete waiting for the sound of the gun before stepping a foot on the gas; left hand, both legs rooted to the ground and hips raised slightly higher than her shoulders, while her right palm gathered a crimson color energy from behind. She would dash forward in a burst of speed, adopting the fullest usage of sonido to disappear and appear at multiple places. Firstly to her left, further to her right, then slightly above the numero, and then lastly come into view behind him while simultaneously flaring her reiatsu to daze him before performing a coffee grinder wheel sweep kick aimed at the feet of the macho looking numero to sweep him off his feet without warning. If successful, she would waste no second to the wind to gun down the numero with a bala aimed at his rib section before fading away only to pop up next to the detestable adjuchas with her right arm stretched towards him.

On doing so, a cubic entity would instantaneously swallow the adjuchas in a dimensional enclosement, separating him from the present world temporarily, while delivering series of shocks that could be detrimental to a target such as him. It would take someone as fast and spiritualy potent as Anya to break free from the confinements of the negaccion box. Meanwhile knowing how an adjuchas could easily transform to a shadow like miasma, it was logical to assume they couldn't keep such form for an extensive period of time, especially in the injured, and worn out state Yagami found himself. So if peradventure he makes use of the infamous technique to avoid been electrocuted, Anya would be poised with her sword unsheathed, waiting to clip him the moment he comes out of the box in his original form.
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[Yagami's Training] Rise or Fall

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Post by Zangetsu » Wed Oct 23, 2019 9:54 am

Katashi watched as the Queen successfully evaded his attack. She moved so fast to her sides, it seemed like she was never really there. Katashi only noticed the Queen when she flared her reiatsu behind him, putting him in a state of stun for a few seconds. In those few seconds, she kicked his foot, just where his ankle would be, causing him to lose balance and fall. She immediately directed a Bala at him. Katashi, having no way to dodge, immediately flared his reiatsu in hopes of reducing damage. The Bala struck the chain on his arm, earning him a minor burn and a broken chain.

Saved by the chain Katashi would immediately get up, he would see the Queen appearing before his partner, stretching her right arm towards him.
Katashi would be seen appearing at her side just above her out streched arm, and would slash down at her arm with enough force to dismember it completely, flaring his reiatsu to the maximum just before impact.

The Queen would find it nearly impossible to evade this attack, as it was in perfect sync with her own attack.
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